Rachel A

My writing is like a river. The sentences are like rivers making its way down eventually coming together to form a paragraph like the ocean. This river has some ripples which represent times where my sentences are different lengths and spread randomly in certain paragraphs. The rocks are the stumbles I come across in my writing. When I step on a rock I forget what I was about to write or what I want to write. The currents are the freeze points in my writing, stopping my brain and making me forget my train of thought. But all together, the ripples, rocks, and currents lead me to the ocean where I take a swim in my writing.